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[考研作文]考研英语作文:疯狂背诵30篇(25) [复制链接]

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Direction 25
Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1. describe the picture;
2. interpret the meaning of the picture;
3. make your comments.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
审题:
该图画描写的是一个敏感的社会问题平价药店受到各方遏制的现象。这篇文章的难度比较高。在描述图画后,可分三段来写:先写药价偏高的现象,再写平价药店的崛起及受到的压制,最后写解决办法。
Sample:
We can see from the picture that several people are condemning a person so violently that it seems that some of them even want to beat him hard. The person has crouched down, with virtually no possibility of striking back. After looking at the picture carefully, we realize that the low?price drugstore has evoked anger and even hatred in many drug factories, various dealers, traditional drugstores and hospitals.
As we all know, the price of drugs in our nation has been too high for quite a long time. After drugs are produced in factories, they go first to the chief dealer, then the subsidiary dealer, and then finally to the hospitals and drugstores. Such a traditional mode of drug circulation drove the total medical expenses higher, putting a heavy burden on urban and rural residents alike.
The rise of low?price drugstores changes the situation completely. When drugs succeed in flowing to such drugstores immediately after production, the cost of management becomes much lower, thus selling drugs at a much lower and reasonable price also becomes possible. But such operation irritates many parties who feel that their interests have been hurt in the process. Among them are dealers, traditional drugstores, hospitals and even some factories. When all of them combine to oppose the newcomers, the existence of these new drugstores is at risk.
I believe that the government should endeavor first to foster such drugstores and then to reform the drug circulation and the medical system as a whole. When we give priority to the interests of the common people, the making of a harmonious society will not be difficult.
点评:
该文共分四段。第一段还是采用先描写图画表层表现的打斗场面,而后再进一步引出本文的主题新生的平价药店受到各方打压。
第二段写了药价过高的现象及其原因。主要原因就是药店流通环节过多,层层加价,给居民带来了巨大的负担。
第三段先写了平价药店的诞生改变了当前的局面。之后写了它们激怒了利益受损的各方,其中有销售商、传统药店、医院和一些药厂。当它们群起攻之时,新的平价药店的生存就受到了威胁。
第四段写政府应当扶植这些平价药店,并改革药品流通和整个医疗体系。最后进一步说,当我们首先考虑普通大众的利益时,和谐社会的构建就不是难事了。
心得:
这篇文章涉及的话题比较难写,我们如果对此问题并不是非常熟悉,就不必深入去写,因为考察的重点是语言,这一点大家切记。
下面来看一些重点的词和词组。
首段首句中的condemn意即声讨。次句中的crouch表示蜷缩。第三句中的evoke表示激起。
第二段中的drug circulation意思是药品流通。
第三段第二句中flow的意思是流通,the cost of management表示管理成本。第三句中的irritate表示激怒。末句的at risk表示受到威胁。
末段首句的endeavor表示努力,后接不定式。次句中的give priority to表示优先考虑,harmonious society表示和谐社会。

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